Monday, October 31, 2011

the end of the scary short story

     When we ate the last chocolate bar. all the lights suddenly went out. next second, a voice hovered around us, "welcome to the brave game! trails and sufferings have already started!" the voice disappeared, and we all fell down. when i opened my eyes, i found that we were living in a graveyard. i tried to wake my friends, but it's failed. i looked around and saw many coffins which haven't buried yet and dark night. i spotted something like a man behind the tree which far away from me five feet. i thought of vampires which i watched in the scary movie immediately. next second, i fell down without seeing anything. the world returned to silence. "woo!" i sat up in bed. i realized that it's a nightmare and wiped the sweat on my forehead. suddenly, a familiar voice hovered around me,"congratulations, you are in the second stage dream. the game is not over."

3 comments:

  1. hi alex! So it was impressive.Do you want to challenge to the next stage?
    ...NAM...

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  2. Woooo. It's awesome!!! It's the best story. I like the "Game", is like the movie "Saw", where if you want to survive you have to pass the games!
    Good Alex :)

    Simone

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  3. Hi Alex, So It's great!!!!! I like this story is scary and funny

    Gretel

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